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This is a short part of a serious rap beat I made the other night.I was going for a LiL John or Pastor Troy kind of feel.If any rapper on here is interested in doing a collab and rapping to this one let me know.
Note - I have not mastered this track yet.I just finished it up and I am not sure I have it how I want it yet.So give me some feedback on this one.It is one of the first rap tracks I have ever made.I also have listened to rap since I was a little kid and started listening to techno music when I was 16.So I have a little better of an ear for rap music.


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Thats cool man i like it proper gangsta ;P
nice dirty bass , very nice , just need some vocals but im sure u'll work on it ;P well done Peace......
Hey Bizz i got this new tune im working on i would like to know what u think whenever u can. Thanx
http://www.maketunes.com/audio/ghosts-in-the-machine
Thanks man for your feedback.I like this track alot I still want to polish it up and work on it a little more.I have a few homeboys who rap too.So I am going to get them on this track Spittin some lyrics with me.Thanks again for your comments bro look forward to hearing some lyrics on this one.
B E-Z and Keep rockin,Dj Bizzerk
Cool man I am going to check it out right now.
B E-Z and Keep rockin,Dj Bizzerk
Rock that 808!
Ya you like that man.I was really feelin this beat when I made it.I tried to make sound like it came straight out of ATL.I don't think I did bad at all for my first rap beat.Thanks for your comment Matt.I see you took my video advice.I will have some to put on here soon bro.If it is possible I will also put my live event video on here.
B E-Z and Keep rockin,Dj Bizzerk
Yeah that should totally be possible... I've got some cool things in mind, so stay tuned for my announcement soon.
Cool man I can't wait.I checked out your video.Dangerously exciting lol.
B E-Z and Keep rockin,Dj Bizzerk
1 word... grimey.
HHHWHAT!
- Cap.
Thanks bro.I was just sitting the other night Spittin some lyrics to myself and figured I would lay out an Ill beat to go with them.
B E-Z and Keep rockin,Dj Bizzerk
yeah man
great professional stuff
fat ass!!;)
YEah-WHAT!
Good job bro. I liked it alot. THe hook is good... very gangsta soundin'
Thanks bro ya I like the little hook myself.Those are actually Pastor Troy vocal hooks I got off the web.I still want to touch this track up a little,but it is pretty much finished.Thanks for your comments guys.Inferno told me the other day that I was better at making rap.I told him rap beats are easy to make they are simple,but when you start making techno it is a lil more complicated.Plus I have hung out in the ghetto and listened to rap since I could remember.I started listening to techno when I got in high school.So go figure.
B E-Z and Keep rockin,Dj Bizzerk
Oh ya if you want to give it a shot at rapping to it Sole shoot me a mail and I will send you the mp3.You will be the only other person to have this track.
B E-Z and Keep rockin,Dj Bizzerk
Let's see if you offer afteryou hear my song. If you still do I will.
I will still offer it to you anyway bro.I like the way you sing and you have been working on it and progressing.So I think you will do good.When it is ready I deffinatly want to hear it.I am going to put some lyrics to this track with some of my boys.So there will be 2 versions.
B E-Z and Keep rockin,Dj Bizzerk
yeah he sure will
you already checked out the vocals he put on my track right?
tight homie
peace
just wait to hear ..difference..finetuned..
Hey bro instead of sending you a link to this mp3 I am going to let you download it from this page.So let me know when you download it so I can change it back.Everyoneelse that wants it better get it while you can it is only for a limited time LOL.
B E-Z and Keep rockin,Dj Bizzerk
Okay I got it downloaded man. THanx.
Cool man let me know when you got it ready bro.
B E-Z and Keep rockin,Dj Bizzerk
So what angle do you want me to go with this song? Is it in my hands?
The goal of SoleMySole: make all music that is not for everyone but something for everyone, every genre, every race, every mix
Create whatever kind of lyrics you want just remember to keep it gangsta and try to keep on the title subject "We Ready Fo Ya".The rest is all yours bro.I have been waiting for you to get started.I can't wait to hear it.
B E-Z and Keep rockin,Dj Bizzerk
You want lotsa swearing like the last one I did had?
You can do that if you want.Something like "Ya we ready fo ya bitch what ya gonna do,Got da paint drippin tippin ya I'm comin through"some shit like that man listen to some dirty south music and get some lyrics wrote down that would make the song dirty south ballin kinda style.You live in Al so you are close to ATL you know what Im talkin about.Curse all you want just try to rap about ballin and we ready fo anything they wanna bring.Ya know what I mean Gangsta Gangsta lol.
B E-Z and Keep rockin,Dj Bizzerk
I dont ever listen to rap music. I would have to hear a bunch to classify anything as dirty south ballin style. I will find ATL and listen to it to get an idea of the way things are wanted. That is as good as I can get it. But you will definitely have an original on your heads that is for sure... and no matter what it wont sound quite exactly like what they have heard before.
That is cool man check out some lil john and the eastside boys or pastor troy that is dirty south bro.The beat sounds similar with the 808 instruments.
B E-Z and Keep rockin,Dj Bizzerk
NICE Strong trax!!!
PUT together WELL!!!
Way To Go On This!!!
Thanks bro I am going to be rapping to this shortly and I gave Sole the chance to throw down some lyrics to this.If you ever want to do a collab on a rap beat let me know bro.I also use fruity loops and know alot about the program.I have been using FL for almost 5 years now.Just holla at me man and let me know I would enjoy it.
B E-Z and Keep rockin,Dj Bizzerk
How the hell did I miss this one homie? I only just noticed it because you just commented on it.
Great track Bizz! It's really Rockin. Are you really going to rap on this? I cant wait!
Coolboy in the mix.
Ya I am supposed to be getting my mic in a few days.It is a little cheap one, but I have some vst's to make the voice sound like it came out of a bad ass compressor mic.I will let you know bro when I get the lyrics on it.Sole is also putting some lyrics on this track.I will let you download it bro when I get the raps on it and that goes for anyone else who is interested also.
B E-Z and Keep rockin,Dj Bizzerk
Great stuff Bizz, yeah let us know when it's ready.
Coolboy in the mix.
THe lyrics are lookin good now DJ B
Cool Sole I can't wait to hear bro.I will deffinatly let you know coolboy.
B E-Z and Keep rockin,Dj Bizzerk
Yea its good, But I got sum thing fo ya...Holla At me lets network...
Master Beats? Are you the guy from youtube?
Crack, What you should do is stick to the first melody that is played, when the song drops, thats Dirty South shit...loop it
Masterbeats..sounds like good advice to me. I need it to go another direction to rap to this. I have lyrics but they don't rap right. I need a hook to the beat to it.
Hooks, Man Thats my thang!!!
$$$ Ma$teR At WorK $$$
Well I have listened to tons of rap and this is my first rap tack ever made.I am still working on it though.I just got my mic yesterday and I need to go get a adapter plug to plug it in to the comp.I am still working on this beat.I was not completely done I was just putting it on and getting advice.I also gave Sole the chance to rap to it,But I got some real nice plans for this piece.
B E-Z and Keep rockin,Dj Bizzerk
Do you want me to rap to it still? I would like to hear it more finished because it would make it easier to collab. But if you have plans now ...then that is cool as hell DJ B, because I have like 6 friggin songs I have to do. You and I can always do something together in the future. I ain't leaving maketunes any time soon and I don't think you are either right bro? :0p
Nope sure ain't man.Ya that will be cool.I am still working on that track like I said I have some plans for it, but I still want you to get down to it.Hey man I also got a question for you.I got my mic and went and got an adaptor for it.I plugged it in the back of my computer but when I go in acid pro and try to record some vocals the mic does nothing.Is there something I have to do to get my programs to recognize the mic?I really need to know because I am dieing to use it.
B E-Z and Keep rockin,Dj Bizzerk
I don't know about sony acid pro because I have extreme music creator and it looks exactly the same. So I uninstalled it. Here is an awesome awesome link for any help you need for sony anything.
http://www.sonymediasoftware.com/download/step1.asp?CatID=12
Hey Bizz did you get your mic working?
What have you got the mic plugged in to?
Ya I got it working Matt.I had it plugged into my mic input.I could hear it through my speakers, but it wouldn't record, your advice helped alot though you were right on the money man.If any one has trouble getting your mic to record in acid pro Matt answered that problem in the Acid pro 6 forum you will see floating around.By the way Sole extreme music creator is made by acid for the record.That is why they look the same.Thanks anyway dude Matt helped me out with it.I would also like to thank you Matt.I would have figured it out, but not so quick.I was kinda puzzled untill you gave me that advice lol.
B E-Z and Keep rockin,Dj Bizzerk
How about getting microphone to show in FL? I have that problem. I cannot use fl vocoder. HELP?
In acis pro all I have to do is push record and it opens a new audio track and starts recording the mic.Try going on a new project so you don't mess any of your work up.Then try pressing record and using your mic and see if it works.I will play around today and try to figure it out as well.I will let you know if I get it.
B E-Z and Keep rockin,Dj Bizzerk
Also man I left some advice on how to use all of your fruity vst's in extreme music creator.I use them all in acid pro.You have to go into your vst search folder in extreme and make it search in your vst folder.It will add them all.
B E-Z and Keep rockin,Dj Bizzerk
Ok Sole I figured out how to record your voice in fruity loops.Go to tools at the top.Click on one touch recording.It will tell you to set you driver to ASIO.After you do that close it and go to tool and click on one click recording again.This time it will tell you to set your input and it will take you to the mixer.Set your input from left to right.Then go click on one click rcord again and it will open up a new ausio channel and start recording your voice right away.Hope this helps bro it let me record mine in there with the same steps.After you do all of that you should not have to do it again.Every time you want to record your voice just go to tool and click one click record and bam you are recording.
B E-Z and Keep rockin,Dj Bizzerk
I guess I need to try installing fl 6 again. The one touch recording isn't an option in tools.
Ya it should be in tools on the top bar where file and channels are.That is how you do it though man.The only thing that sucks is when you record your voice when the track is playing it also records the music with your vocals.That makes it hard to go back and edit your vocals.You can always record your voice on a new project and then export it and put it in your track.That is the way I have been doing it untill I get the hang of things.try reinstalling FL.It works on mine I don't have a clue why you don't have that in tools.It says one click audio recording right above Macros in the tools section.What kind of mic are you using?I am useing a Dynamic mic.From what I heard and experienced they are pretty good.When you reinstall just follow the steps I explained.It should work.
B E-Z and Keep rockin,Dj Bizzerk
One thing Sole, if FLstudio is saying you have to switch to ASIO mode before it will work, if you're still using onboard audio, you won't have that option.
That may be what it is Matt because I had to switch to ASIO before I could record.It tells you that when you click on one click recording.
B E-Z and Keep rockin,Dj Bizzerk
I am all set now guys. FL6 is on and I can vocode now with integrated sound but my mic port on my brand new sound card doesn't work. Thanx.
Hey Sole, that will probably be because of your audio settings in Windows. You probably still have your integrated audio setup as your microphone input default in windows, so none of your software will even know about the soundcards mic input.
If you want to, you should be able to change that in your Control Panel in windows under "Sounds and Audio Devices"
ThaNX mATT I will check it out.
Hey here is the new version.I still want to turn those bells up a lil and add a piano.Other than that it is finished.Sole and I are collabing on this and both going to be rapping and doing the chorus.Sole is also probably going to put the piano in it to his perfection I already put one in it, but forgot to save the flp when I closed it out.
B E-Z, Dj Bizzerk
I just love this man, it desperately needs someone to rap in it, but don't look at me lol. I thought you was going to rap in this? It's wicked mate, great job.
Coolboy in the mix.
Ya Sole and I are both going to rap to it.I just had to finish the beat and we still have to put a piano in it or something of the sort.I will let you know when we got the finished rapped to song.If you want a copy of this the way it is I will send it to you bro. Let me know.
B E-Z, Dj Bizzerk
Yeah, I would love to have a copy as it is too. The only trouble is the last time I tried to receive an mp3 via email I couldn't get at it as it was deleted by one of my protection software's. May be you could upload it to Mediafire and send me the link? Thanks bro. I'm sure it will be great once finished ;)
Coolboy in the mix.
Ya I will upload to mediafire and send you the link.Thanks for the comments homie.
B E-Z, Dj Bizzerk
Yeah, we are gonna both rap to it. I am going to throw in some piano roll flair. I've got ideas.
Coolboy, why can't you lower or change your instant email junk settings? I use yahoo (you know that) and norton. From both sides I can specify for what is what. But mp3,s come through fine and the second norton antivirus starts wiping out shit without my consent I will obliterate the program and go to trendmicro or avg or something.
Thanks a lot DJBIZZERK I got it bro ;)
Hey Sole, yes I could do that but I don't normally receive mp3's via my email so I prefer to have the settings the way they are, it does a great job with keeping out all the shit, my virus checkers delete anything suspect. What I'll do is set it to ask me first, in future, also my internet cable company also has deleted iffy stuff sent to me, before I even got to see it and they let me know with a message and it may have been there end that actually deleted that mp3 before, I can't remember, thanks for the advice man ;)
Coolboy in the mix.
Ya no prob homie anytime for a friend.
B E-Z, Dj Bizzerk
:0)
cool
Thanks for the comment Carl.Sole and I are about to put vocals on it so it will be the shit then.
B E-Z, Dj Bizzerk
yo BIZZ I got the perfect "Down South" drums for the melody in this song...the first melody, if you want you could transfer the melody to me and I would have the finished version in about 1 day.Trust me this collab iz SERIOUS!!
$$$ Ma$teR At WorK $$$
Ya I already started reworkin a different version, but if you want man ya I will send you the flp and you can collab with us.We are almost ready to put some lyrics on it.So I will shoot you a mail and send you the goods.
B E-Z, Dj Bizzerk
Yo BIZZ? Whats up with this beat and you and Sole?? Have you guys posted it somewhere, or is it still in the works? If its just sittin around... Well, lets just say I rap, and I live in the ATL, so YEAHYAAAAAAAA! Hit me up if y'all aren't doin the colab anymore!
We are. DJB has been doing stuff live though. He hasn't gotten back with me yet. But I am cool with a three way collab. I added to the instrumental already and then sent it back to him. Your vocal skills are great Amittai. I wanna definitely do something with you in the future if that is cool too though. But I totally am cool about joining forces with you and DJB on this one. FO SHO!
It's up to BIZZ on this one then...
And yeah, either way Sole, lets colab in the future.
Cool man. Definitely bro. I wanna do a rage against the machine type song with you. ROCKRAP
Rock-rap it is then, Sole!
Yo Bizz... Lets get this beat some vocals!!!! Hit me up I want to help!
man dis beat is fukin phat, luv da rewind sample. nice scratching 2
Ok cool Amittai you can help bro.I been meaning to get with sole on this but I been really damn busy bro.We can do that though man get back with me and we will discuss it.TY fo the comment Eazie.I made this beat from scratch man with a few samples from the famous site breakbeatparadise.com.Check it out man they got alot of good sounds.I also used one pastor troy sample.
B E-Z, Dj Bizzerk
great d'south beat mate!! Thx for this instrumental! :D