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JO FUNK

29 September, 2008 - 21:05 — J. Yocom
  • Artist: J. Yocom
  • Title: JO FUNK
  • Album: n/a
  • Track: 2
  • Year: 2008
  • Length: 3:12 minutes (7.33 MB)
  • Format: Stereo 44kHz 320Kbps (CBR)

First attempt at a beat. Second song I ever made. Had a little help with the bass and the finished mix from my friend. Let me know what you think? HONEST CRITIZM PLEASE


Comments

29 September, 2008 - 23:53 — IngridTornado
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I think it is pretty original and hypnotic. Maybe a tad repetitive for my taste, but that is just my taste. Otherwise pretty tight...

Love, Ingrid

30 September, 2008 - 01:04 — GIECHI DAN PROD...
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Well Done! Funky little groove

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30 September, 2008 - 06:51 — J. Yocom
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thnx for the comments

30 September, 2008 - 06:52 — J. Yocom
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appreciate the honesty

30 September, 2008 - 14:56 — DjWillieF
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Mann Great job for it just being your second beat, It's got a good feel to it bro, you used some cool sounding synths! Great job! Keep it up!

Check out my latest:"Like A Fallen Angel"

1 October, 2008 - 03:44 — CapricornOne
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Old skool like a mutha!! You should drop that bendy synth for a spot... that would sound tight! Maybe just down to the drums and use the drums with the faster hitting kicks. And kick that high pitched synth you have running in the bg then add those climbs at the end of every 2 bars. run that for 8 bars and call it a DROP!! Great track... especially if its only your second song all together. Keep at it!

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1 October, 2008 - 06:19 — Pitbull
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Well I agree, the track may get abit repetitive but all my songs get that, too xD! Great track, very catchy. For your second song ever...CRAZY!!!

1 October, 2008 - 07:42 — wolf21
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Very nice track bro.... I loved it except for the leading insect sounding synth. Background and vox are excellent.

2 October, 2008 - 07:27 — J. Yocom
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Thanks for the feedback. I will do my best to make this beat better.

3 October, 2008 - 17:57 — SteadyWinds
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i like it has a nice vibe.

all natural life

5 October, 2008 - 00:03 — coolboy
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Yes Nice vibe going on and it's very catchy, some good constructive feedback in these comments. A little more variation is the jist of it I feel and sound advice, but for a second go I've got to give you big props dude, I thought it was great!

Coolboy in the mix.

5 October, 2008 - 00:57 — MarCoast Beats.
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i really like that first synth if i could steal it i would lol

damn for a second track this is pretty good though!
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3 November, 2008 - 12:57 — The Sole
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Oh yeah, gotta agree with Ingrid. The foundation guitar was okay for the first 20 times and then it just got a little much. THe synths were nice. Was that You vocoding? I felt the chimes kind of clogged the melody a bit.

3 November, 2008 - 21:05 — J. Yocom
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lol Yeah its repetative but it isnt a guitar. Thats me vocoding. Its only the second song I ever made and its the first beat I ever tried to make.

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