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Sasha - First Beat On New Pc

29 August, 2008 - 11:38 — sashamaz
  • Artist: Sasha Mazendame
  • Title: First Beat On New Pc
  • Year: 2008
  • Length: 1:00 minutes (2.28 MB)
  • Format: Stereo 44kHz 320Kbps (CBR)

This is a new grime kinda beat i'm workin on - i've never made grime b4 so i need some help on were to take the beat and in what ways i can improve it


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29 August, 2008 - 15:33 — CapricornOne
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The tempo's a little too fast... drop it like 10 - 15 bpm That's the only real thing wrong... All of the elements are there. I can clearly hear a hook and a verse. So you're pretty much at the point of cutting and pasting fill the track out. After you have that done, you'll have an easier time adding you're drops and tweaking the track. Maybe bring that saw synth into the verse, but make it do a two or three note bend instead of the arpeggio... kinda like a one shot. That's just an idea. You could also drop it to that low synth you have firing in the hook, somewhere in one of your verses. Take them ideas and run with 'em.. You got the raw talent man... I can't imagine what you're gonna be doing with this shit in 10 years when you're my age. You're 16, right? That's just crazy what you're doing with this shit! PROPS! Props on top of props!

Be good... or just good at it
You keep it pimp... I'm a keep it gangata!

http://www.myspace.com/1andonlycapricornone

29 August, 2008 - 20:11 — matt
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Yeah Cap I totally agree, young dudes coming up today just growing up with all this music stuff. Great to hear whats possible already, and imagine whats round the corner

1 September, 2008 - 01:55 — Pitbull
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Nice track, I also agree with cap. Just drop the tempo!

2 September, 2008 - 09:00 — DjWillieF
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Cool track but I agree with cap, drop the bpm other than that it's coming along great! Good Job!

2 September, 2008 - 12:39 — The Sole
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What the guys said and also make it longer. It was great though while it lasted! I love the emphasized bass shots bro! Some real energy here!

28 September, 2008 - 23:04 — naffu boi
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some say the track is kinda fast lil bit, but I say..me luv it.

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