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Teknogoff - Decompossed Clown

19 August, 2008 - 01:21 — Radx
  • Artist: The Author
  • Title: The Title
  • Album: Album
  • Genre: Blues
  • Year: 2935
  • Length: 4:34 minutes (5.23 MB)
  • Format: Stereo 44kHz 160Kbps (CBR)

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19 August, 2008 - 04:12 — CapricornOne
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The snares are a little much. They take away from the synths. The lead in is great. It would allow a DJ to mix or lead in to this track. But after that, it kinda leads nowhere. Some more variation before the 2:45 mark would be nice. Keep working on this 'cuz it has some potential. I see you did some good work with your drops, but they still need to have that "suspense" to them. Something to leave the listeners hanging just long enough that it gets 'em really moving when it kicks back in. Also an ending is needed.
I know you're kinda new at this, but you've got the stuff needed. All you need to do is keep working at it. Everything in due time.

It'll do what it do till it done
You keep it pimp... I'm a keep it gangata!

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19 August, 2008 - 08:45 — DJ Caesar
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I agree to what CapricornOne has said. While listening to it, I started asking myself: "and then?", it's too dull, there's no action in it. It needs more work.

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You live with a heartbeat, I live with a bass beat. The E-DJ cHecZar.

22 August, 2008 - 02:36 — Radx
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This was the last thing i did before i left college.basically a lot of copy and paste cause i was streched for time.i just liked how off-beat the drums kinda were to the synth but still in-a-way fit.im sure i did write more but those college computers kept fucking up.probz deleted the variations

30 August, 2008 - 09:10 — The Sole
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The drums are powerful sounding. It does need tangents like the guys were saying. Throw in some off the wall and bunny trails. Then twist it back to your foundation. Still an enjoyable listen. The gap there around the 3min mark needs something in it. Maybe an earie fx? This track brings to mind 'war'!

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