After working towards being an MC for 20 years...

I've pulled it off, passably. Not club banger material, but at least I can stay on beat the majority of the time and write my own material. And yes, I sound white, I AM 8^P

Anyway. I've already got one request in so I'm not taking any more song requests so I'm just looking for any random feedback that anyone may want to provide. I do have beat production skills but I will admit that all but the torrents song below come from construction kits. I wasn't going to reinvent the wheel after getting back to rapping after being away from it for so long...

Tricky Dicky (Dick Cheney song)
http://www.maketunes.com/audio/the-incomplete-orchestra-tricky-dicky-pre...
Anime
http://www.maketunes.com/audio/the-incomplete-orchestra-anime-preview
Illegal Torrents
http://www.maketunes.com/audio/the-incomplete-orchestra-legal-torrents-p...
Taste Of Victory (weakish song, performance wise)
http://www.maketunes.com/audio/the-incomplete-orchestra-the-taste-of-vic...

These were all written in the last five days. Still practicing them so these are not "finished product."

I have 14 songs done, just that the other ones I used torrented beats so I won't be sharing those mixes until I either buy the license or put something legitimate under my vocals.