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Feedback Forum Xlll

Click here for the latest feedback forum!

Do you want feedback? Then you have come to the right place! With the ever popular forum comes the 13TH installment version. Ptbull,Ed, Wolf21, GIECHI DAN PRODUCTIONS, Dj WillieF, Capricorn One and TooGoodToBeTrue have signed on as sole's assistants but now sole has had to step out of his position. Feedback is hard to come by on the internet. This forum is for just that purpose. This forum is a way to bring into spotlight your song from another additional front on maketunes. We are a close community and the top highest users are there because it isn't just about gimme gimme gimme. If you get listened to, then by all means check out the artists who commented on your tracks. In this way the concept of give and take, instead of gimme gimme gimme, take effect. Do not post your user link which links up to hundreds of songs to hear. The list goes as follows:

What am I missing?

Listen to my slop!

Hear my masterpiece which is finalized and mastered to my desire. Please hear it!

What do you honestly think about my music.

Don't hurt me- I am new here, and I was wanting somebody, anybody to give me the first comment of my innocent life. Go easy on me.

FEEL FREE TO POST YOUR LINKS TO THE SONGS AS THIS WILL MAKE IT EASIER TO NAVIGATE TO YOUR MUSIC AND BE HEARD.

Feel Free to post your video links!

Feel free to post picture links!

If you are new... then we want your post requests as well. Do you know of a cool website geared toward musical production within a homestudio? Post it here! Know of a musical contest happening or a cool website to check out? Post it (we may not join the website) for feedback! This is an avenue for you to use. Happy creations from the Feedback Forum Staff and all the loyal citizens here on maketunes as well as internet travelers/silent listeners! Everyone is welcome here. Post away!


DjWillieF's picture

The last forum hit the two page mark so I started Feedback Forum Xlll

MarCoast Beats.'s picture

lol
i'll sign on as an "honorary feedback giver" :D

Check out all of my BEATS
CLUB BANGA/TIME$ ENTRY : KICK-DOOR!

DjWillieF's picture

OK Bro I'll Put you on as the newest member of the feedback forums!!

MarCoast Beats.'s picture

cool.
i'll be givin out feedback as much as i can!

Check out all of my BEATS
CLUB BANGA/TIME$ ENTRY : KICK-DOOR!

GrandScam's picture

Check out my tracks. Your feedback so far has been so help full that I just want a steady stream of constructive critisism so I know what to fix. I'm self taught and I have a rare abundance of creativity,but as a result,I have trouble bending my mind in favor of the technical aspects.
Help me with that and in turn I offer my help any way I can.
P.s,I havn't forgotten about you to good to be true,I still owe you some feed back. Thank you for yours,it was right on point.

GIECHI DAN PRODUCTIONS's picture

http://www.maketunes.com/audio/in-too-deep-a-glimpse
IM THE BOSS ALL YOU RAPPERS HAVE TO REPORT TO!

GIECHI DAN PRODUCTIONS's picture

http://www.maketunes.com/audio/the-title
IM THE BOSS ALL YOU RAPPERS HAVE TO REPORT TO!

CapricornOne's picture

Wolf21 did this ill little interlude with these bush samps... I did something similar a ways back with a "Just Say No" speech by Ronald and Nancy Reagan... I twisted the words around something wicked.

Reagan's New Drug Policy

Be good... or just good at it
You keep it pimp... I'm a keep it gangsta!

Check out all my stuff here

http://www.myspace.com/

GrandScam's picture

Many Tracks for your listening pleasure many more coming up today!
Check it out.Please leave a comment if you can.http://www.maketunes.com/audio/dont-be-skurrdscarry-track-entry

CapricornOne's picture

OK... so after all this time, I've FINALLY figured out an easy way to mix my beats with accaz. After f'n around with Virtual DJ Pro 5.2 for about 10 minutes, this is what I got. I'm sure once I actually figure out how to fully use VDJ, it'll sound a whole lot better. This is just me throwing random accaz to a beat and mashing the sync button till one of them sounded right. I need to know what more I should do to mix up stuff. Any and all help will be greatly appreciated!

Likwit (Capricorn One Martian Remix)

Be good... or just good at it
You keep it pimp... I'm a keep it gangsta!

Check out all my stuff here

http://www.myspace.com/

CapricornOne's picture

I'm getting kinda good at these remixes. Check this one out!

Pharaoh Monch - Simon Says (Capricorn One's SOtB Remix)

Be good... or just good at it
You keep it pimp... I'm a keep it gangsta!

Check out all my stuff here

The Sole's picture

Speaking of Pharoah(thanks Cap) ...here is a hiphop track from yours truly, and the 3rd submission from me to the TIME$ Contest.
http://www.maketunes.com/audio/the-sole-desert-times

GrandScam's picture

Heat any one?http://www.maketunes.com/audio/wave-goodbye

GrandScam's picture

http://www.maketunes.com/audio/wave-goodbye
Alright too Good. Check it out. I lost the pre mix file,so I had to re do the whole mix. I think it's better becuase I can't even listen to the other one so I think it's a good sign that this one has made the other one sound crapy to me. I did it a little differantly this time also.

GrandScam's picture

http://www.maketunes.com/audio/wave-goodbye
Alright too Good. Check it out. I lost the pre mix file,so I had to re do the whole mix. I think it's better becuase I can't even listen to the other one so I think it's a good sign that this one has made the other one sound crapy to me. I did it a little differantly this time also.

GrandScam's picture

http://www.maketunes.com/audio/grandscam-0
another new one. Finally done

GrandScam's picture
TheAbeyant's picture

http://www.maketunes.com/audio/cataclysm-instru-the-abeyant

-The Abeyant

-www.myspace.com/theabeyant

GrandScam's picture

With a Title like this one,you must be at least a little curious
http://www.maketunes.com/audio/moneysexdrugs

myspace.com/micromoral

William87's picture

Hi, any kind of constructive feedback is welcome: http://www.maketunes.com/audio/user/12283

Thanks,
William F

Teddy Brazello's picture

New electronic song I made.. check it out.

Tech Demo II

Teddy Brazello's picture

Song I put together over night. Got some good inspiration. Anyways check it out let me know what you think of it.

Murderous Instrumental

The Sole's picture

One of my best hiphop vocal performances remastered. Brought to you by P!tbull and myself.
http://www.maketunes.com/audio/smokin-tokin-and-chokin-a-bloke-in-again

DjWillieF's picture

Nice bro Sick ass intro it caught me and the song kept me! Excellent job my brotha!

DjWillieF's picture

whoops that last one was for SOLE

DjWillieF's picture

Got a new Hip-Hop joint up Let me know Maketunes!!

DjWillieF-Tension

King Dattoli's picture

Time$ Beat Contest 4 (Commercial)

check this out pretty funny

GIECHI DAN PRODUCTIONS's picture

Just a Little Somthing that emerged from within
http://www.maketunes.com/audio/or-the-highway

IM THE BOSS ALL YOU RAPPERS HAVE TO REPORT TO!

DJBIZZERK's picture

Damn I just now went to page to of the last forum and found this one. I was wondering why the forum wasn't coming up in tracks with new on it anymore lol. Anyway I have a new track I need some feed back on. It's not completed yet but I could use some feedback and opinions. It's some dark and dirty Jungle/DnB. Let me know what ya think.

http://www.maketunes.com/audio/jungle-fever

B E-Z, Dj Bizzerk

DjWillieF's picture

Here the latest DjWillieF release Exclusivly for MakeTunes let me know what you think!!!!!

Cold

DjWillieF's picture

DAMMMM Naffu BOI Killed this one Check it out FOR REAL!!!

http://www.maketunes.com/audio/like-a-fallen-angel

The Sole's picture

Yeah he did.... Naffu Boi rapped that shit up tight as hell. Give it a listen peeps! You wont be disappointed!

MarCoast Beats.'s picture

yooo i got a new joint up check it out!

I Get My Cheese

Check out all of my BEATS

New Joint : I Get My Cheese

telmoribeiro's picture

yo i'm new here. critics needed!!!
Just wanna to learn a bit more . . .

http://www.maketunes.com/audio/user/12365

telmoribeiro's picture

chech my latest work. mellow experimental sh*t.
tips nedded!!!!

http://www.maketunes.com/audio/wamba-legend

GrandScam's picture
The Sole's picture
telmoribeiro's picture
taurusmoo's picture

Hey folks.

Just spent all night sorting this one out, have a listen and see what you think!.

http://www.maketunes.com/audio/times-edge

MarCoast Beats.'s picture

its hard keeping up with these posts so i'll give u folks feedback soon!!

Check out all of my BEATS

New Joint : I Get My Cheese

CapricornOne's picture

2nd FL Studio beat (My first one... don't worry 'bout that) My 1st for the T.I.M.E.$. 4 contest. All me, no loops/samples, all piano roll, no MIDI, done at work, so my levels might be off, cuz I have pretty primitive speakers.

Weapon Of Mass Production

Be good... or just good at it
You keep it pimp... I'm a keep it gangsta!

Check out all my stuff here

GIECHI DAN PRODUCTIONS's picture

http://www.maketunes.com/audio/new-age

IM THE BOSS ALL YOU RAPPERS HAVE TO REPORT TO!

wolf21's picture
The Sole's picture

There is 198 songs in my portfolio... not counting the songs that P!tbull and I produced through our duo group called S.O.A.P. (Sole Of A P!tbull) and I have now been a member for 2 years and 1 hour. I am drinking tonight to the success. Bottom line... I have been involved with over 200 tracks in a two year timeframe. Let me hear ya say "Oh HELL YEAH!" I am drinking tonight to celebrate!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

DjWillieF's picture

OH HELL YEAH! I'm drinkin my forty Budweiser with you!!
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YO CHECK OUT MY LATEST
KING DATTOLI and DJ.WILLIE.F- COLD
and
Dj.Willie.F-Tension

MarCoast Beats.'s picture

lol djwillie speaking of Budweiser..

"true true.."

Check out all of my BEATS

New Joint : I Get My Cheese

MarCoast Beats.'s picture

wait

here u go

Check out all of my BEATS

New Joint : I Get My Cheese

DjWillieF's picture

Dam Mar you took me back, I needed that, I haven't seen the frogs in years, I owe you for that!!
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YO CHECK OUT MY LATEST
KING DATTOLI and DJ.WILLIE.F- COLD
and
Dj.Willie.F-Tension

CapricornOne's picture

OK peoples! I have some more Rell for ya! I didn;t do the beat on this one, but I did record and engineer the track. That's what I'm looking for in feedback. Read the description for how I did this recording. Rell is on the third verse... the rest is Slick Chris... It's his song. Oh... and VERY explicit lyrics... put the kids to bed. I did the best to get rid of the few "P" pops... (One of them in Rell's verse is BAD) But if anyone knows a good way, other than a pop filter on the mic, something post-recording, to reduce the pop... tell me, PLEASE!

Some Niggaz

Be good... or just good at it
You keep it pimp... I'm a keep it gangsta!

Check out all my stuff here

GIECHI DAN PRODUCTIONS's picture

http://www.maketunes.com/audio/what-is-it-produced-by-cap-one

IM THE BOSS ALL YOU RAPPERS HAVE TO REPORT TO!

TheAbeyant's picture

New song using my "Cataclysm" instrumental

http://www.maketunes.com/audio/ill-be-there-the-abeyant

-www.myspace.com/theabeyant

snaptogrid's picture

the song was 10 min but i shrunck it down for you

snaptogrid's picture
DanstheTsar's picture
DanstheTsar's picture

ignore that actually it didnt update!!?

GrandScam's picture

Heavy Sleep with new intro

DjWillieF's picture

YO HERE"S MY LATEST REGGAETON JOINT!!
DjWillieF-Loose Control
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AND CHECK THIS OUT
KING DATTOLI and DJ.WILLIE.F- COLD
and
Dj.Willie.F-Tension

wolf21's picture

WE SHOULD ALL APPRECIATE OUR LIVES AND OUR LOVED ONEZ

http://www.maketunes.com/audio/loved-onez

CapricornOne's picture

I'm having a bit of trouble with my exported track. There's these hisses, but they're not there in FL... Help! Other than that, check this out. Just ignore the hisses... I can assure you, they are not part of the beat.

Beaten Path

Be good... or just good at it
You keep it pimp... I'm a keep it gangsta!

Check out all my stuff here

CapricornOne's picture

About my above post... Just to let you know. I have NO demo VST or software associated with FL... Everything is registered, but I still get the intermittent hiss.

Be good... or just good at it
You keep it pimp... I'm a keep it gangsta!

Check out all my stuff here

The Sole's picture

;-D Read the intro to this song and start adding this info in your song uploads if you wanna let them download it. The more this message can get out to the browsers the better it will get for the download amounts guys. Click here-> http://www.maketunes.com/audio/the-sole-funk-wit-da-hip-hop
to view my last TIMES CONTEST IV contest submission. Now I gotta finish a vocal that me and Jnizzy are working on. Then onto 3 collaborations. eh hmmm.... not counting what the winners choose for their prizes in the SCARIEST MUSIC/SUSPENSE CONTEST.

telmoribeiro's picture

under construction need opinion...
http://www.maketunes.com/audio/jumpin-up-and-down-sample

peace!

GrandScam's picture

I tried to sqeeze a last minute scary track entry last night but didn't make before deadline. I felt like it had alot of potential so I kept going with it and this is what I ended up with. Let me know what you think.
http://www.maketunes.com/audio/ryan-tracy
Happy Halloween to all of my new virtual producer freinds!!!!

MarCoast Beats.'s picture

I uploaded some tracks, but didn't post em in here...

Check em out folks!!!

Strugglin'

Time For A Vacation

Recipe to Destiny

and finally...

Machine Gun Flow

Check out all of my BEATS

New Joint : I Get My Cheese

King Dattoli's picture

Time$-Take Notes

Check it out maketunes , download free

CapricornOne's picture

Fixed it! Had to do it in a round-a-bout way... but I did it!

Beaten Path v2

Be good... or just good at it
You keep it pimp... I'm a keep it gangsta!

Check out all my stuff here

snaptogrid's picture
snaptogrid's picture

http://www.maketunes.com/audio/luft-town
europe all most house german

GrandScam's picture

http://www.maketunes.com/audio/ryan-tracy. For some reason I can't get the http address to show the name of the track like it ussually does. If this link doesn't take you straight to the track, The name of it is Abusing excuses. Thanks
Ps. I have noticed that alot of people I owe feedback to have mosted new tracks. I havn't forgotten about you. I promise I'll be there soon.

snaptogrid's picture

http://www.maketunes.com/audio/come-close-to-me
e mu sucks i need a new one with a fresh software packeg
any one no of a good pc recording emu 1820m waas 7 in 7 out put

J. Yocom's picture

Come check out my new song. All feedback welcome

R.P.E. - Why Do You Ask

telmoribeiro's picture
The Sole's picture

http://www.maketunes.com/audio/the-sole-off-the-chain
CLub Banga 'Get Some Honey' vocalized by myself and Jnizzy

CapricornOne's picture

Help me! Help me! This is a REEEEEAAAALLLLLYYYY rough draft of what I'm working on... I've just been seeing all the great ideas everyone here has been offering up, and I could use some of that help. I'd like some feedback on where I should take this.

Allusions of Grandure (1st Draft)

Be good... or just good at it
You keep it pimp... I'm a keep it gangsta!

Check out all my stuff here

DjWillieF's picture

¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡NEW SUPER HOT REGGAETON TRACK!!!!!!!!¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡

YO Check this one out Maketunes I EXTREMELY PROUD OF THIS ONE!!

DjWillieF- Mi Cancion(My Song)

Please let me know how my mastering was on this one as I'm focusing on that!!

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YO CHECK OUT MY LATEST
DJWillieF- Loose Control

CapricornOne's picture

I'm dropping this is all the forums I can! I rap. There I said it. If you didn't know, now you do. It's just that I never had a mic of my own to lay my minimal written material. Well that changed this Sunday. I picked one up at Guitar Center for 60 bucks with the protection plan (I always get the protection plan, cuz I have real shitty luck with stuff) Let me know how you like my flow!

Dirty Empire

You keep it pimp... I'm a keep it gangsta!

Check out all my stuff here

Pitbull's picture
MarCoast Beats.'s picture

got another one hot off the press!

Check out all of my BEATS

If you want a download, just send me an email ( marcoastproductions@yahoo.com )

telmoribeiro's picture

http://www.maketunes.com/audio/jumpin-up-and-down-sample

new version... thanks for the criticism ... Peace ...

TheAbeyant's picture
GrandScam's picture

I couldn't have gotten so much crap done but I just had to finish this track,I spent all week on this thing and it still doesn't sound right to me
Let me know what you think. Mabye I'm right or mabye I'm just to close to the prodject.http://www.maketunes.com/audio/the-martistgrandscam

matt's picture

Hey GrandScam just so you know, if your URL isn't "touching" the fullstop of the previous sentence, it will become a clickable link...

King Dattoli's picture

Game Remix (Paper on my Mind)

New track ..hope ya'll like this one

GrandScam's picture

Ok guy's I want to pretend that you didn't hear that track and listen to it again. I'm resquesting a muligan. I think it's fair to say that I took a leamon and turned it into leamon drink. The funny thing is that No one had listen to it yet when I was just about to put the new one up. It must have happened pretty much at the same time. aint that just my luck.

GrandScam's picture

Oh good. I didn't post the link.Forget I even just said that. There's a gap after the hook and I fixing it and making acouple alterations right now. Nobody listen to it.

The Sole's picture

:0) What are you talkin about GrandScam? ;0)

GrandScam's picture

lol!! Sorry sole!
http://www.maketunes.com/audio/the-martistgrandscam.
This is what I'm talking about. I've steped it up a little more. But I was having trouble showing the evidence. I was having some issues but I've got em st8 now. Feast your easr on this bad boy.

The Sole's picture

IT is bad ass Grand Scam!

The Sole's picture
GrandScam's picture

Still steping it up.......http://www.maketunes.com/audio/over-board-timeentry

GrandScam's picture

I don't under stand why some times it comes up as the blue link and some times it doesn't. Over Board (Time$entry)

GrandScam's picture

I'll try that again....http://www.maketunes.com/audio/over-board-timeentry

GIECHI DAN PRODUCTIONS's picture

http://www.maketunes.com/audio/the-boss
IM THE BOSS ALL YOU RAPPERS HAVE TO REPORT TO!

snaptogrid's picture

http://www.maketunes.com/audio/come-close-to-me
it isnt an mp3 i have a ghost in my software that scroos things
up i think it might be Q base or my emu-1820 all leads are real
but some parts were made by vst inst FL 8 AND THE VST
Q BASE HAS. I HAVE SOMANY VST S FRIM ALL OLD SCHOOL
MOOG ROLAND JUPITER KORG M1 O 1 W DRUMS INTELGENT
ARANGER ONE BLOCK AT A TIME TO ME
THE SONG SOUNDS LIKE AN OLD CLINT EASTWOOD SPAGGETY WEST.

DjWillieF's picture

Grand Scam you need to completely separate the link from the sentence!

Wrong way:
I'll try that again....http://www.maketunes.com/audio/over-board-timeentry

Right Way:
'll try that again.... http://www.maketunes.com/audio/over-board-timeentry
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YO CHECK OUT MY LATEST
DJWillieF- Mi Cancion

TheAbeyant's picture
MarCoast Beats.'s picture

NEW REMIX!! CHANGE CLOTHES!!!

Check out all of my BEATS

If you want a download, just send me an email ( marcoastproductionsATyahoo.com )

chino's picture

Sup Names Chino yall can get me at chino21085@gmail.com or
6786227657@tmomail.net for more info and tracks

SUP!!!!!!
Long time! Been out way tooo long. CAPONE!!! wATUP!!!
tried calling ya man/ where u at!?
do it to it.. Chinaman in this sh***// tell me what yall thank on dis 1?!!
Good to be back in this game!!!!

http://www.maketunes.com/audio/chino-0

The Sole's picture
King Dattoli's picture

Check out this week's featured artist of the week
If you don't comment you will never be the featured artist.

GrandScam's picture

http://www.maketunes.com/audio/lava.
Still pushin that boulder up the hill............

GrandScam's picture

it's like a ghoast town around here.http://www.maketunes.com/audio/lava
Am I the only one here with no life?

MarCoast Beats.'s picture

yoooo ppl i need feedback on my new remix!!

Check out all of my BEATS

NEW REMIX!!

If you want a download, just send me an email to marcoastproductionsATyahoo.com

CapricornOne's picture

Whew... three in one evening... that's a personal record! Check 'em out!

Symphonic Chronic

Los Lobos de la Noche

Strung Up

Be good... or just good at it
You keep it pimp... I'm a keep it gangsta!

Check out all my stuff here

EUGOD's picture
The Sole's picture

I deleted the last track link submitted. This goes in it's place.

GrandScam's picture

I put this up on a low trafic day so I think it may have sliped by unoticed.

GrandScam's picture

That's weird.http://www.maketunes.com/audio/lava thought i put the link up guess not.

CapricornOne's picture

Scam, d00d! Put a space in between the period and the link!
Like this. http://www.google.com
Not like this.http://google.com
Here's your link: That's weird. http://www.maketunes.com/audio/lava thought i put the link up guess not.

I hate having to select the text and paste... I'm a lazy son of a bitch! :P

Be good... or just good at it
You keep it pimp... I'm a keep it gangsta!

Check out all my stuff here

Pitbull's picture

Damn ive missed out on a lot of tracks...If Ill start listening and commenting now maybe im finished in a few weeks...lol
http://www.maketunes.com/audio/chillout

GrandScam's picture

Ahhhh! Duh. Yeah,I'm pretty undersmart when it comes to some stuff.Ussually the more simple it is the more it boggles my mind. I was wondering why sometimes it work and some times not.
If not putting a space after a period is weird though dude,then you probably need to start getting out alittle more often.

GrandScam's picture

Ahhhh! Duh. Yeah,I'm pretty undersmart when it comes to some stuff.Ussually the more simple it is the more it boggles my mind. I was wondering why sometimes it work and some times not.
If not putting a space after a period is weird though dude,then you probably need to start getting out alittle more often.

GrandScam's picture

Damn hit it twice. see what I mean? Pitbull,If you'd like a copy of any of these,just let me know and I'll enable down loads. I just like to regualate how many copy's I let float around out there.hat goe's for all the regulars around here as well.

Pitbull's picture

Haha I actually meant all of the tracks I missed out, not that you posted your links a couple of times. I wanted to say I wasnt around for some time ;P
No worries, a lot of people dont get the link-post-thing!

Pitbull's picture

Guys, there is only 6 days left to vote for the roots contest on indaba. If you wanna support me VOTE PLEASE!
http://www.indabamusic.com/submissions/show/3270
:P thx

King Dattoli's picture
taurusmoo's picture

http://www.maketunes.com/audio/the-traveler

Something new a bit more mellow after a break. Used the piano to compose for a change. See what you think. Feedback appreciated.

matt's picture

Voted for your track Pitbull! Quick get your votes in people! You don't even have to create an account, just enter one of your email addresses to quick-vote.

The Sole's picture

I voted for P!tbull as well. People you don't have to join the site to vote. Just input your email address. By the way here is my next vocal piece:
http://www.maketunes.com/audio/the-sole-crank-shank

DjWillieF's picture

Yo what up Maketunes I've been super busy lately my weekend is coming up and I'm eager to listen to all the new tracks!! So keep them tunes coming PEACE!!